To Do List

Steven,

DELETE THIS POST WHEN YOU HAVE MADE YOUR CHANGES!

Your blog is looking fairly good so far. You have posted some research and planning and there is some nice detail, design and content included.

Make sure you upload you evaluation questions to your blog as the last posts.Not all of them seem to be present and one or two are incomplete. Q1 is blurry, rotate it the right way round too please, don't give the examiner an excuse to mark you down. Q5 is basic and perfunctory. Q2 doesn't provide enough depth or detail. The whole evaluation feels more than a little rushed.

Your editing commentary is a little brief, it would be nice if you provided some screenshots as evidence of the problems you faced.

Make sure all of the images you have embedded to your blog are rotated the right way round!

Explain specifically why you had to reshoot, I gave you very specific feedback. Don't just say you redid it because I told you so, explain what the problem was with each shot.

Your blog MUST include a pitch & storyboard and should include location and casting decisions. Details are on the AS media blog. You won't get a level 1 (E-D grade if these vital elements are clearly apparent!) Make these quick changes and your blog will improve from an E to a B.

Enjoy the rest of your break,

Mr S

Final Film

This is our final film, so all of our effort has pulled off and now you can see the result of our hard work, so sit back and enjoy the show.

The End

This is the end of the our journey together, so therefore without any further ado, farewell from me.

List

This is the list of all the ways I could answer the evaluation questions. As you can see by the list there are a number of ways I could present my answers to you. But I have ticked off the ways I'm going to present my answers.

Title

This is our final and the title scene we will use for our film. As you can see the all black back ground suites well for the genre we are trying to achieve. The lettering has a glowing effect which makes the candle look like it is doing the effect. Whereas the writing underneath looks like candle wax which has dripped down.

3. Dear Steven,　We are thankful for you for sending your film into us, as we appreciate young and aspiring directors making films and sending them to us, as we are committed in supporting these people, as we believe that young British independent directors should be given a chance to show off their skills to the world.
As for your film we like the concept behind it, and would like you to further the film in length and story to the point of a full feature length film, which we would like to distribute, as you are the perfect candidate for us to invest to as we have had other success with other independent British films, like Four lions.
As for your film we like the concept behind it, and would like you to further the film in length and story to the point of a full feature length film, which we would like to distribute, as you are the perfect candidate for us to invest to as we have had other success with other independent British films, like Four lions.
But we have put our name to other films such as Tinker Tailor Soldier Spy, Tyrannosaur and Don't Be Afraid of the Dark.
So we look forward to receiving your answer to our offer.
Yours Sincerely
Peter Frost
CEO
Optimum

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